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Subject:   check my essayyyyy
Name:   Hasan Ali
Date Posted:   Nov 3, 06 - 10:55 AM
Email:   ikali_r@hotmail.com
Message:   Should wealthy nations be required share their wealth among poorer nations by providing food & shelter? Or is it the responsibilities of the govts of poorer nations to look after themselves?


No doubt about that poverty is one of the major problems of the world today. Poverty is an alarm bell for the economy of many developing countries. So I believe rich nations should support poorer nations for alleviation of poverty for these.
Firstly, we all are living in a global village era. For this it is the duty of all to help each other, what ever the circumstances are? So if the super powers of the world stand with developing nations, it would certainly strength the bond between them. Moreover, it brings the peace, fraternity and harmony among the world.
In addition, rich countries should help poor ones for their own sake. As poverty arises, the tendency to migrate to wealthy nations arises too. Certainly, it brings lot of headache for them. The problem like unemployment, health, etc. will irritate their annual budget.
Furthermore, developed nations can exploit this situation in their favor. By the financing in underdeveloped countries, they can utilize their natural recourses and get the profits for great deal. Surely, it helps the economy of poor nations. More and more bilateral trade will help this cause too.
However, it is not an ideal approach to rely on aid of rich countries. The govt. should itself realize the situation well and plan to dig out this evil. Govt. should put lot of stress on professional education and agricultural sectors. In turn, it will prove most useful steps against poverty.
In conclusion, to mulling over this issue, I think both rich nations and govt. should require a great contribution towards this problem and corresponding infrastructure.
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Re: check my essayyyyy by MIKE · Nov 7, 06 - 11:35 PM


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